Have you ever had your hero who has special power? The "I Had A Hero" was written by Mike Tidwell. This story is about two man dig their pond for fish. One day, Mike and Ilunga decided to dig pond for fish. Actually, they have only shovel for digging the pond and it was very hard for them to dig with only shovel. Ilunga tried to make pond which twice big as Mike make. After digging pond, Mike thought that Ilunga is one of the his hero.
I used two strategies called "I drow picture on the paper what i just read to help me remember what I read", and "I underline or circle information or ideas in the text to help remember". The first one helps me to remember what I read and to understand easily. The second one also helps me to remember the story well, because I can go back to read again when I confuse what I read.
I pridict that they will dig other pond again. Mike will work harder than last time because he want to be a man like hero, Ilunga.
1 comment:
Your sentence is very easy to read for me, so I did not need to use a dictionary. But your response does not have a reason why and how Mike thought Ilunga is a Hero. Your usage of finishing is very simple, but, it is too simple. You lack of important scene. People who can understand your essay is only people who knew this story. If you use a quate or example from original story, reader can imagine easily more.
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