One day in Jamaica, there are a mother and her daughter and the mother teachs her daughter what her daughter should do. I quite do not like this passage because it is annoying!! There were a lot of sentences that talking about same things in tone of command. If my mother says to me like a person in this passage, I will run away from my house. By the way, I think if her daughter follows what her mother says, the daughter will be successful lady in the future. I pridect that this daugther will have a rich husband if she becomes like what her mother says. If you are the daughter, do you want to follow what her mother says for your good future?
The Blob that Ate Everyone
17 years ago
2 comments:
I think that good idea that you use the question to the readers. If I am a daughter, I will feel bad. But I feel that her mother just wants her to be good woman and she loves her daughter very much.
i had same impression with you after i read the story. The mother is annoying. Is there any commands from your mother which made you feel annoying?
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